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PostSubject: My Poetry..   My Poetry.. EmptySat Feb 11, 2012 8:19 pm
Hi Everyone. I write Poetry and want to be a Poet some day. But, to do that I need critique. So, Can you please read my poem and say what you like, what you don't like, and write it from 1-10 only. I will post some more after another. Thanks! (:

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My Heart is beating really fast.
I'm reminiscing about my past.
The Pain.
The Horror.
The Tears.
It's gone.
I still remember when I was alone.
But now, I'm better.
Happier, Indeed.
Although, I will never forget my time of grieve. By: Neomi (:
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PostSubject: Re: My Poetry..   My Poetry.. EmptySat Feb 11, 2012 10:23 pm
IAmMexican(; wrote:
Hi Everyone. I write Poetry and want to be a Poet some day. But, to do that I need critique. So, Can you please read my poem and say what you like, what you don't like, and write it from 1-10 only. I will post some more after another. Thanks! (:

(No Title Yet)
My Heart is beating really fast.
I'm reminiscing about my past.
The Pain.
The Horror.
The Tears.
It's gone.
I still remember when I was alone.
But now, I'm better.
Happier, Indeed.
Although, I will never forget my time of grieve. By: Neomi (:


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PostSubject: Re: My Poetry..   My Poetry.. EmptySat Feb 11, 2012 11:04 pm
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IAmMexican(; wrote:
Hi Everyone. I write Poetry and want to be a Poet some day. But, to do that I need critique. So, Can you please read my poem and say what you like, what you don't like, and write it from 1-10 only. I will post some more after another. Thanks! (:

(No Title Yet)
My Heart is beating really fast.
I'm reminiscing about my past.
The Pain.
The Horror.
The Tears.
It's gone.
I still remember when I was alone.
But now, I'm better.
Happier, Indeed.
Although, I will never forget my time of grieve. By: Neomi (:
Seriously? (:


omg its really really really really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: My Poetry..   My Poetry.. EmptySat Feb 11, 2012 11:33 pm
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❤LuvYa4Ever wrote:
IAmMexican(; wrote:
Hi Everyone. I write Poetry and want to be a Poet some day. But, to do that I need critique. So, Can you please read my poem and say what you like, what you don't like, and write it from 1-10 only. I will post some more after another. Thanks! (:

(No Title Yet)
My Heart is beating really fast.
I'm reminiscing about my past.
The Pain.
The Horror.
The Tears.
It's gone.
I still remember when I was alone.
But now, I'm better.
Happier, Indeed.
Although, I will never forget my time of grieve. By: Neomi (:
Seriously? (:


omg its really really really really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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PostSubject: Re: My Poetry..   My Poetry.. EmptyThu Feb 23, 2012 9:47 pm
Better than mine<3
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PostSubject: Re: My Poetry..   My Poetry.. EmptyThu Dec 27, 2012 3:20 am
This is.... berdyful gurrrlllll!!! Lol.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poetry..   My Poetry.. EmptyMon Feb 25, 2013 9:14 pm
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